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..Weird

That was really, really annoying. but interesting none-the-less.

You accomplished what you intended..Blowing out my speakers, haha.

-Jon

lunchmeat63 responds:

:)
i know thank ok thank ok?>

ahaha

That was kinda cool. I need some glitch effects for a movie I'm making. I think I'll mess with this until I get something I need.

Hehe.

diabeticbunniducks responds:

Cool! Could you get anything?

Wellllll

This is clipping like a sum-bitch! Turn the overall mix down, and it wont sound like that. Unless you intended it to sound like that, I don't know. It sounds really...really bad.

Getting past that, it has a cool piano melody going over the drums. They work well together. There is another sound going on there but I can't distinguish it because the quality is so poor.

Weapongod30 responds:

Yeah, the quality for some reason went waayy down when I imported it, the drums got a graty quality to them, and a skip was created at the end. In garage band, it sounded perfect, and it looped perfectly. Anyways, thanks for you review!

heh, cool.

Really cool groove on that organ. They work well with the drums. I couldn't really hear the lyrics though.

I liked it.

AznPB responds:

Here's the lyrics just in case anyone can't hear them.

"Twins travel twin trains to Trenton.
Twins travel twin trains to Trenton.
We shall see the sunshine soon.

Give it a lick,
Make it quick,
Before it melts,
Off the stick.

Plop!
It dropped...
It sure is tough.
You didn't lick it fast enough!"

Prerrt sweet

Woah, that was totally kick as dude! but you know what? That piano that plays in the background should have had some effects on it. I kinda do the same thing too when I make my songs: I have one thing throughout the whole song that derrives my inspiration to add mroe effects trough the song...And you really got some kick ass sounds in here. Not to mention, it is all leveled out great, too.

I loved everything about the song except for that piano playing for so long, when you dropped the drums and started with a cymbal you should have stopped it right there and added some more effects like you did later on with that really cool synth.

Keep at it man.
-Jon

axeman666 responds:

Wow. Lot's of enthusiasm, thanx.

woad woood

I really liked the drums. They sounded awesome and had a really good groove to them. The beginning was trippy with the water thingy sounds. This song really kicked along nicly.

I felt like I was dieing on a boat.

neighborhood-plastic responds:

haha, thanks!

loved the breathy voice

Really awesome everything. I realllllly loved this song after the vocals kicked in. Then they stopped and you had some awesome sounds bounce in with a slower tempo, I thought that was the best part in the song. I really dug all those elaborated drum sounds added around then, really nice. Damn, I'm done, lol.
I noticed you took a good months break as commandor of the sea....SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!?! CHAOSS!!

AdmiralConquistador responds:

Hehe, I'm happy you liked the song so much! The half time part is very chill and cool sounding, I have to agree.

lol, I am commander of the sea, aren't I? Is it really Chaos? I might have to restore order

-ac-

WeeeEEee

It had a slight video game feel to it from that synth, and there was also some low-bit quality stuff that added to that (don't know if it was intentional). I really dig this type of music man, because it doesn't really have a specific place in any genre. I mean, yeah it's Trance, but I've never heard this much variance in a song. This has fucking everything! There is so much new stuff set in all the time...I love it. Perfect 10s all around. I really liked how you slow everything down and bring up one little tune, and then bring back the 4 on the floor. MWahahah

Only suggestion is to have a longer intro and ending. Kind of add little sounds here and there and remove sounds little by little. it just comes to a brick wall for the ending. that kinda sucked because I was following the song, and It needs to lead me to a feeling that the song is over. Especially with so much different stuff that you added into the song; it makes me wanting to know what happens next. But in no way does that alter my capacity to enjoy the here and now within the song.

I ono...Great stuff. All your music rules.

What would you give yourself for effort?

-Jon

AdmiralConquistador responds:

Wow, great review, thanks so much man! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, even though I made so many mistakes with it. This is in no way the final though, I'll probably release the final later on this week, hopefully as a top5 contender. Anyway, yea I know, several transitions are a bit abrupt, and I was out of time for the ending,it was approaching 5 minutes and any longer than that and the quality would have had to take a huge nosedive. I'm glad you like the variation I gave the song, because personally I'm not a big fan of the repetitive style trance is all about. I'm trying to bring about the revolution, all by myself, hehehe. Thanks for listening, and enjoying all my other music as well, great to know I have new fans, hehe. What would I give myself for effort? Even on this mistake-ridden piece, I'd give myself a 12.

-ac-

Here to disperse my self gratifying music. Some may be spontaneous, other tunes were stuck in my head. The latter being more deterring.

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